Wednesday 9 November 2016

Narrative Stories

We are learning to write Narrative stories. This week we have been looking at a picture of a soldier who looks very sad. We thought that he might be sad because his friends died in the war.

Here is Ofeyliah's story:

Long, long ago there was a soldier. He was sad. All of his friends died. He went back to see his friends at the cemetery. That was the end of that.

This is Kalo's story:

Long, long ago in New Zealand there were soldiers who went far far away from New Zealand to fight. Some went back to see their soldier friends that had died. Then the soldier went back home.

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